#SoCS Feb. 6/16: The Point – Poetry
for Stream of Consciousness Saturday – Prompt: “finger”
Warning: Rated R for foul language
The Point
Don’t point your finger at me
like I am your property
a babe to reprimand
a child kept underhand
you think you’re so wise
with your understated compromise
telling me I’m no good
while you rip the neighborhood
dressed to kill
seeking out the latest thrill
fanning and fawning over men
broadcasting your sin
I want none of your hypocrisy
with your husband awash at sea
he gave you everything you own
it’s now time for you to atone
I may not be a saint
but here’s my biggest complaint
you threw yourself at me
begging me to believe
you’d give up all the rest
if I could pass your silly test
I can only be who you see
not who you want me to be
So what if your life’s a bore
and you are digging around for more
sorry to be so blunt
but you’re just a fucking cunt
©February 2016 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.
Love the rawness of it, Lori. 🙂
Thank you, Linda 🙂
Talk about a surprise ending! Now I know what finger she was pointing – powerful.
Talk about a surprise ending! Now I know what finger she was pointing. Very powerful!
*laughs* thanks Julie!
Whew. So many levels. This was great.
Thanks, John! Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
🙂
Haha, oh come on, tell us what you really think.
*laughs* Thanks!
I definitely feel your anger and frustration. Well said. Thank you so much for your kind words on my blog. I really appreciate it. I hope 2016 will be a great year for you.