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Collectively Dreaming – #Drabble

March 16, 2016


for 100 Word Challenge – Prompt: Dream


Collectively Dreaming

The weekly meeting was called to order. They sat around in a circle to discuss their latest dream. The same dream, collectively.

“The sky was bright blue, white clouds hovered over a green pasture…” began one member.

“And strange creatures roamed in the field…” stated another.

“They’re one race, but some are yellow-haired, some black-haired, and others red-haired…” a third surmised.

“And their eyes! blue, green, brown! Strangest things I’ve ever seen,” a fourth declared.

Everyone nodded with their silvery heads. They stood up, walked across the crystal ground and looked up at the violet sky with their yellow eyes.

©2016 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.

(100 words)

  1. Delicious and quirky use of your 100 words. i love this!

    Ally 🙂

  2. Oh cool! A uni-mind! Great piece!

  3. Love this! We all exist in the collective minds of an alien race. You painted a fascinating picture.

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    It took me a moment to realise the role reversal. A clever little piece! I’ve always wondered how aliens would see us humans… I mean, probably with some degree of curiosity and terror. For example, the gas we breathe – oxygen (yes, mainly mixed with nitrogen, but indulge me!) is volatile enough to serve as rocket fuel…

  5. Loved the idea you went for here, great job!

  6. I love this one for sure! You do these so well! I was in a great woman’s circle once and this reminded me of that. Thanks for the memories and great post!

    • Thank you, Annette 🙂 I am glad you enjoyed my little story and that it invoked memories for you 🙂 x0x0x

  7. This really creates some great images!

  8. I wouldn’t be at all surprised if inhabitants of other planets have different colored hair and eyes, trees and sky. That idea fascinates me.

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