“Swiftly” Haiku
for Haiku Horizons – Prompt: “fast”
“Swiftly” Haiku
swiftly Ocean carries
starfish upon the seashore
mimics Milkyway
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Love this!
Thank you, PJ (may I call you that?)!
Yes, absolutely! PJ
awesome 🙂 thanks, PJ 🙂
Awesome! Makes me think of summer which I can’t wait to come!
Thank you, Dan 🙂 I am waiting on Spring… Summers are okay, but I don’t care for the heat and humidity 😉
yea you are right Spring is the best weather and that is my birthday. One day of the year I get a gf chocolate cake.
Nice.. my birthday is in June.. I used to have carrot cake each year, White Russians and a festival of movies.. no more cake and drinks though, but I still do the movies 🙂
for my birthday i get tons of new horror movies watch them too. i dont drink anymore on too much meds now. klonopin is a much higher dose and that and booze is trouble. i love the movies. monster club was great.
Yeah, I drank only rarely when I was on all of those psych meds. I would go off of them for a week as it neared to my birthday.. probably wasn’t the smartest thing I ever did. I watch old 80s and early 90s movies on my birthday 😀
Cool I go for horror movies usually old school ones from 80s too.
Lovely. Thanks for following my blog. I can see I’ll enjoy following yours too!
My pleasure, Linda 🙂 and thank you for returning the follow 🙂 Have a great weekend!
You too!
Thanks 🙂
Very nice!
Thank you, Bekkie 🙂
Beautiful imagery! Lovely haiku. 🙂
Thank you, Payal 🙂
wonderfully expressed Lori 🙂
Thank you, Archie 🙂
Wonderful !
Thank you, Milan 🙂
Breathtaking.
Thank you 🙂
Such a lovely image! I like the idea of a haiku prompt — will try one myself this week!
Thank you.. oh you should! I did these back a year or so ago and have just started up again with Haiku Horizons. Lots of fun! I look forward to reading yours when you do 🙂
I always think about the galaxy within a galaxy when watching the ocean. Thank you for the lovely haiku!
Oh I love that analogy! Beautiful! Thanks for stopping by for a read 🙂
I love haiku writing too. 🙂
It is a beautiful writing form, isn’t it? I so love it too 🙂 Cheers!
That’s nice 🙂
Thanks, Richard 🙂
Welcome 🙂