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“Swiftly” Haiku

February 7, 2016

for Haiku Horizons – Prompt: “fast”


“Swiftly” Haiku

swiftly Ocean carries
starfish upon the seashore
mimics Milkyway

Β©February 2016 Lori Carlson. All rights reserved.



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  1. Awesome! Makes me think of summer which I can’t wait to come!

    • Thank you, Dan πŸ™‚ I am waiting on Spring… Summers are okay, but I don’t care for the heat and humidity πŸ˜‰

      • yea you are right Spring is the best weather and that is my birthday. One day of the year I get a gf chocolate cake.

      • Nice.. my birthday is in June.. I used to have carrot cake each year, White Russians and a festival of movies.. no more cake and drinks though, but I still do the movies πŸ™‚

      • for my birthday i get tons of new horror movies watch them too. i dont drink anymore on too much meds now. klonopin is a much higher dose and that and booze is trouble. i love the movies. monster club was great.

      • Yeah, I drank only rarely when I was on all of those psych meds. I would go off of them for a week as it neared to my birthday.. probably wasn’t the smartest thing I ever did. I watch old 80s and early 90s movies on my birthday πŸ˜€

      • Cool I go for horror movies usually old school ones from 80s too.

  2. Lovely. Thanks for following my blog. I can see I’ll enjoy following yours too!

  3. Very nice!

  4. Beautiful imagery! Lovely haiku. πŸ™‚

  5. Archie permalink

    wonderfully expressed Lori πŸ™‚

  6. Such a lovely image! I like the idea of a haiku prompt — will try one myself this week!

    • Thank you.. oh you should! I did these back a year or so ago and have just started up again with Haiku Horizons. Lots of fun! I look forward to reading yours when you do πŸ™‚

  7. Cascadian Nomads Bethany Clochard permalink

    I always think about the galaxy within a galaxy when watching the ocean. Thank you for the lovely haiku!

  8. I love haiku writing too. πŸ™‚

  9. That’s nice πŸ™‚

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