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Frozen In Time – Poetry

January 3, 2016

for JusJoJan – prompt: frozen


Frozen In Time
~for JK~

I see you there
still the same as before
warm eyes smiling back at me
a mischievous grin
bashful and playful
as you lean in for a kiss

Your silken touch
still sends shock-waves
coursing through my being
elevates me
stirs desire I’ve never known
before or since

Our bodies cling
through want and need
breasts molded against breasts
thighs pressed against thighs
fingers searching
for orgasmic pleasure

I see you there
exhausted in moonlight
spent and content
beads of sweat drip
from your forehead to my shoulder
cradled against my chest

You are frozen in time
in my memory
never a day older
nor a second delayed
from that perfect moment
when I loved you most

Β©January 2016 Lori Carlson


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  1. Beautiful! A well written and enjoyable piece!

  2. Lovely. πŸ™‚

  3. Beautiful and sensual. Great poem.

  4. Beautifully sensual and erotica.
    The last stanza is bittersweet and poignant.
    “A wonderful response to frozen,” she concludes.

  5. Thank you πŸ™‚

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